That Night In My Best Friend’s Bed (18+) – OLUWALOLOPE OSIDIPE

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I love writing, photography and generally being goofy.
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17 Responses to That Night In My Best Friend’s Bed (18+) – OLUWALOLOPE OSIDIPE

  1. anonymous says:

    okay!

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  2. Samuel G Smith says:

    seriously?… it was all a dream.. I love the suspense. nice job guys… keep the pen flowing..

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  3. oluwafeyikemi says:

    Nice!

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  4. sapiosexual says:

    Nice story buh I don’t do fiction. I’ll pass.

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  5. farounfisola says:

    Lol. Nice one

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  6. Larry says:

    Wow, that was intense. Nice 1. Love it

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  7. Famakin Opeyemi says:

    Impressive

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  8. Black says:

    Good story idea, nice twist at the end, didn’t expect it tho, so much typo’s, be a bit more detailed, don’t try to summarise and assume the reader should conclude the rest. In all, it was a decent first attempt.. Keep it up

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  9. Kanku C says:

    Wow nice one,loved the suspence.keep it up.

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  10. Stigma says:

    Very Nice!!

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  11. Really impressed by your phrasing, grammar and verbiage. It was beautifully constructed and artfully worded. Your words painted an image so clear, it depicted the events so accurately. I can’t say I care much for the story but it’s execution was superb. Never stop writing.

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  12. OriginalBadBoy says:

    no try dah rough play again!!! shey u dey hear

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  13. Da_Diarist says:

    This is so nice, even though the dream thing is a cliche, you have carefully explored it and had given it an edge. The typos tho and your tenses, be consistent. But I did not actually hear you moan. Work more on your similes. Paint more pictures and stop telling us. In all, you are good.

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  14. onyiluv says:

    very impressive…. I didn’t know u had it in u… u hv inspired me….kip it up Vicky

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